Sunday, April 1, 2012

Poetry Analysis: The Whipping by Robert Hayden

Before reading this poem, I thought that it was about someone whipping someone or something. After reading it, I know that it is about an old woman, maybe a grandmother, beating a small boy, maybe the grandson. I can tell that is struggling and crying. He is sobbing because maybe he had done something wrong. I didn't understand some of the poem and what it was trying to say. I think it was some imagery that I couldn't quite decipher.

There were a few enjambments and caesuras here and there, but what I wanted to focus on was the imagery. There was a lot of imagery that I didn't exactly get. I think that the narrator is a neighbor who is watching this little boy get beaten up by an old woman. I liked this poem and would like to understand it better.

I didn't understand when it stated, 
"Wildly he crashes through elephant ears,
        pleads in dusty zinnias"
I also couldn't quite get the poem when it said,
"My head gripped in bony vise
        of knees, the writhing struggle
to wrench free"

1 comment:

  1. Avani, it's OK to have words or phrases that are confusing, but show me how you are trying to work them out. What are zinnias? With that context, what might the speaker mean by "elephant ears"? How could someone's head be "gripped in a bony vise of knees"? This is work you can and should do as you are analyzing. Also, what is the poet doing with the enjambment and caesura? How are they being used and to what effect? Push yourself to find all of the techniques being used here and to think through what you don't immediately understand.

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